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Elemental -Air by TriZiana Elemental -Air by TriZiana
This was very much inspired by a video I saw earlier today of Skrilex. Not my type of music, but the video is just absolutely amazing. here's the link so you all can watch it!!! [link]

This is also my entrie for =faestock 's creative challenge.

Model: by =faestock
BG: by *Sed-rah-Stock
Textures: by ~darkrose42-stock
and by ~Sirius-sdz

The rest painted by me.

mippieArt 2012 Not to be stolen!!!
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Critique by MLArtistry MLArtistry/critique/628408437">May 13, 2012, 8:28:41 PM
I love this piece. What I like the most is the way you used the smoke, it really is wonderful how you incorporated it into the picture, and how it softens up the harshness of the industrial background. The wisp of smoke that floats upward from her fingertips is nice as well. I had some initial confusion about the meaning of the piece until I saw that you explained where you got the inspiration from. I admire that you were able to interpret someone else's work and form your own. I am glad I came across this when looking through groups. :)
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Critique by neurotype neurotype/critique/629666356">May 16, 2012, 11:22:29 AM
(please ignore the stars, they hit weird on a phone)

I have to say I really like the concept. The first thought.that occurred to me was that she's drawing the mist through her body, and that was intriguing. The pose you selected for this was perfect. The setting of some kind of abandoned factory is unexpected, too, which I like; plenty of girls in forests doing mystic things.

That said, I'm.very confused by the light sources in this. Assuming.the source is off to the right, the left side of her arm shouldn't be lit up. The main problem, though, is there's no indication of a light source strong enough to create the highlights or shadow. It should have a stronger effect on the background.

The smoke in her hand also needs work. Looks like it was drawn in so I'd recommend a more delicate brush for the opaque portions. Also, is the ground on the right side of her body out of perspective?

That all said, though, the textures on the bg look convincing. The composition isn't totally daring but it works for this, and I am interested in the narrative potential.
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pjenz Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this reminds me of a scene with jennifer garner in alias, she had this goregeous red dress on and she was swinging on a rope or chain or something, in a warehouse and her hair was a gorgoues reddish match to the dress. this is beautiful, the model is gorgeous, and i love the feeling of such ravishing beauty in a dark and cold place, she stands out so very much more :love:
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Jassy2012 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
great work, well done :love:

I wish you a nice day :kiss:

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samueltd Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Featured here:
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:iconharelforge:
HarelForge Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nice idea I like the concept!
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Montjart Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
nice
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TonyJeffers Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I like your source material.
It's really cool that the red is so sticking and captivating:wow:
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TriZiana Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!! :heart:
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BigA-nt Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love this picture - love the original too. Faestock is excellent. Great work. well done. :D
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thejamesstark Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Professional Photographer
so mystical! I really like this :) good job!
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:iconpaul-wildboar:
Paul-Wildboar Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Fantastic!
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:iconavogel57:
Avogel57 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Very nice! good luck :D
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xXDeathForYouXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks really, really nice! I agree with that first critique about the lighting and the smoke though, but the idea and such is really lovely!
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much!!
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xXDeathForYouXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^.^
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:iconluckydesigns:
luckydesigns Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful piece! :love:
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!
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:iconluckydesigns:
luckydesigns Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome! :hug:
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:iconsergle:
Sergle Featured By Owner May 18, 2012   Digital Artist
This is so pretty!
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!!
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:iconpandinus:
Pandinus Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome artwork, great detail and nice pleasant colors. I like this piece quite a lot
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ahw, well thank you very much for the kind comment!!!
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Pandinus Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You are most welcome :D
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Sophia-M Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
very nice
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gemlovesyou Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome, love the concept!
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:icontriziana:
TriZiana Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank yoU!
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MissGrib Featured By Owner May 16, 2012   Digital Artist
Very great work !!!... good luck for the challenge :D
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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MissGrib Featured By Owner May 17, 2012   Digital Artist
You're very welcome :D
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Le-Regard-des-Elfes Featured By Owner May 15, 2012   Digital Artist
Beautiful!
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much!
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NibbleKat Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like all of it, but I think that for me, when I think of air, I think of blues, whites, or greys. Her red robe says more "fire" to me than "air..."

I love the way the two top textures blended together to make a grungy, gritty feel.
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FIYAS Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
Lovely.
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PlaguedPhantom Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Photographer
Very nice c:
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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ZeroLiver Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Love it!
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!!!
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Patrick2011 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
fantastic work my dear friend :la::D:huggle::glomp:
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank yooooooouuuuuu!!!!!!!! :tighthug:
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Neranella Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
Awesome job. ;)
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:icontriziana:
TriZiana Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!!
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Viktoria-Lyn Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job combining all the elements, its seamless and very beautiful.
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! I really appreciate it!
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LucasValencio Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Beuatiful work :hug:
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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j3ff3rson Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
This is so beautiful !
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much!!!
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denormART Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome manipulation!
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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tinca2 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AMAZING :love:
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TriZiana Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks :heart:
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